OK so I’m up to chapter 20 and the scene in the synopsis hasn’t been presented yet… The author keeps bringing up a contract and it’s conditions without having written about it. The small “flashback” descriptions are really annoying when the scene never “happened”. Did the author mistakenly forget the opening scene that set’s up the circumstances for this entire story? If not, why bother making it the synopsis for your book? You’ve brought our expectations up only to let us down. I’m trying to enjoy this story but I can’t because of this error.
Maryixxx
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