Brilliant work author. Adding a new force huh. In my next life if I'll have to study about this force too, believe me I'll not forget cursing you too. Btw nice to meet Paul, unlike yours my Paul is really in s/m stuff and I can really relate to Julien we think alike especially in football. Anyway about your work, well it's good, I enjoyed, the only complaint from my side is the names of some of the characters, Paul, Julien okay but Alit.... Aldre... see I can't even write those names much less remember or speak. Well it's my problem I think. Anyway, the story is smooth and you have an amazing world building and character designs are pretty good too. There were some grammer issues but since I myself is bad at it so I'm not sure if I can say it's error. All in all a good read and definitely awesome for someone who is into science and for those who are not in science like me, you too should read it, either you'll start loving science or hating it all together. In the end I'll just say dear author please update it more regularly.
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