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CarnTheSlayer
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2022-01-16 18:34

I’m not gonna waste my time writing a long review so in short, this novel is bad. The characters are all stupid and the main character does not have a personality apart from killing everyone. The author does not understand how the government would actually operate. Like a secret facility kills the son of the two greatest hero’s and no one investigates this… like what. I quit on chapter 40 because the book was simply making me mad at the amount of stupidity. Give it a try, if you manage to turn your brain off you might enjoy.

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Bacho_Bacho
Bacho_BachoLv2

bruh its absolutely different world. no one knew that lucifer was kept in the facility. and till 40 chap there is no character that has ny importance in the show yet. if u would continue reading u would see many very intresting strong and smart characters. plus mc has great development. he is still villain but is more calm and smart and doesn't goes around making a mess. after taking his revenge he has new goal and purpose that he chases. so people who read this aren't braindead they are simply patient. this story is not for someone who can't keep up with dark story like that

Siminala
SiminalaLv3

maybe zhat's just me but I read till chap 123 till i couldn't bear lucifer anymore it always just felt so annoying with him alays having to be evil and emotionless killing mashine lucifer just felt like some stupid ai that wouldn't listen to anyone I get that he is and underdeveloped kid and all but he doesn't even feel human it got to a point where I just rooted for the people trying to kill/capture mc and it never paid off if the story gets better good for you if it's interesting maybe i'll pick it up again

Bacho_Bacho: bruh its absolutely different world. no one knew that lucifer was kept in the facility. and till 40 chap there is no character that has ny importance in the show yet. if u would continue reading u would see many very intresting strong and smart characters. plus mc has great development. he is still villain but is more calm and smart and doesn't goes around making a mess. after taking his revenge he has new goal and purpose that he chases. so people who read this aren't braindead they are simply patient. this story is not for someone who can't keep up with dark story like that
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Demonic_angel
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Author Review! Alright, after 21 days of this book release and seeing the reactions, I think I am finally ready to review my book. So here it goes: Story Development: It's a Story about a boy who was thought to be powerless in a world where a lot of people awakened with various abilities. Pretty standard, right? But that's when things changed. Seeing that he was useless, they used him for their experiments to test how much pain a human body could bear. Unfortunately, this test didn't stop before he died. His body was tossed away only for him to Awaken finally, not with one ability but with many more. The kid who was thought to be a useless human was someone who was out for revenge. At its core, it seems like a revenge story, but it spreads out in many exciting directions, which I'm sure some of you will like. It's also a villain vs. heroes story where good variants and MC are on the opposite side. World Background: It's a story set in a modern world It'll be a profound and interconnected world. It's a world where Dungeons exist, but monsters can't come out of the dungeons. They can only come out when certain conditions are met. And to make sure that doesn't happen, there are various Organizations. It's also a world where people Awaken with power, so there are crimes involving them, and there are also heroes who stop them and catch the Dark Variants. The world will also involve many more things. I don't think any amount of words can explain it here. So please read. Character Design: I'm trying to make the characters unique, but you shall be the judge of that. I can't comment on this. Update Stability: Daily updates with bonus chapters every Monday or Tuesday. So 5 star :p Writing Quality: I try not to make any errors, but where there's a human, there will be errors, so please forgive me if you see one or two mistakes once in a while. Last Words: I'm sure if you come with an open mind to enjoy a story, you'll like it. It's a pretty interesting story, and it gets even better later. PS: Some people say the story gets a bit dark on occasions, so... reader's warned if they don't like that? But I don't feel like it's too dark, so please be the judge of that. (´;ω;`) Have a great day, thanks for going through such a long review Yours Obediently, Demo- Oh god, why am I writing it like a letter now? (ᗒᗩᗕ) JK, honestly, though, I hope you'll enjoy what you read. If you don't like anything, please comment or inform me in my DMs.

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