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2022-03-09 14:46

A sweet, simple, youthful story about an immature but beautiful and romantic first love born in difficult times. What I really appreciate about the author is that her stories don't end with the characters deciding to be together but the reader accompanies them through a further period. In this story that is missing for me. I keep getting the feeling that there should have been more. The story is actually finished, but the author always manages to add more, so I hope for a continuation. Although the book has some minor flaws, I give 5 because they are not serious and I hope that a good rating will encourage the author to continue working on this title.

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AmberFullMoon
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Thank you for your support. I plan to write a follow-up, but in these troubled times, I need to focus on slightly different things. I hope to be able to bring you a continuation of these adventures at some point.

LJRosa
LJRosaLv10

I know what you mean. Terrible things are happening in your area of the world. I pray for peace.

AmberFullMoon:Thank you for your support. I plan to write a follow-up, but in these troubled times, I need to focus on slightly different things. I hope to be able to bring you a continuation of these adventures at some point.
AmberFullMoon
AmberFullMoonAuthor

So do I

LJRosa:I know what you mean. Terrible things are happening in your area of the world. I pray for peace.
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