Review Detail of Aeipathy_02 in Into the abyss

This is quite an intriguing read 😌. Writing quality. Everything is detailed and easy to read. From the start, it hooks you with the air of mysteriousness the story gives and it's getting better and better as the story progresses. Great work, author! Keep it up! P.s. I know you might hear it from the others but the mix-up of tenses is quite causing confusion sometimes. This is also the same problem I face when I begin writing and now still struggling with it lol. But you can use these apps, Grammarly helps to maintain present tenses while google docs words help maintain past tense. Though you still need to proofread them because they miss some words most of the time. (Hope this helps.)