Review Detail of Lonewo1f in Into the abyss

At first, I thought it was related to some kind of vampire stuff and all. Then, later I came to know that it isn't. The work is based on Greek mythology. I used to love this concept. But, I have read so many novels that it has become a normal plot setting for me. Still, the author tried to bring the change by introducing Luna and her involvement with God. So, I can appreciate that. The writing quality is decent and very understandable. I did find many errors in the prologue. But, the synopsis says ~ it's going under a huge revision so I'll overlook that for now. Story development was good too. I liked the characters so far. The world is vast and that is why I think the pacing is slow, which I understand. To show such a vast world, it will require a lot of words to make your readers fully immerse into the chapters and your world. Overall, it was a good read and I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!!