Review Detail of Luzparadise_ in The Day She Met a Heartless Guy

Ako 'to si Tenk, I've read the your story na. The plot is normal and you could see right through it and you will already know what will happen to them. The MC is not likable but I think there will be a character development that will soon arise. But maybe the ideas of mine that pop into my brain might be wrong but despite the fact it is still well written and worth to read. There is still more rooms for improvement but don't be discourage, you did great and I might as well finish your story. This story has potential and the author too. Keep writing!