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WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv51yrWN_grdy_mthr_fker

lazy writing, non likeable mc ... even rapist and murderer are likeable mc such as Dextor , yun che (against the god) so reason mc is unlikable is because of lazy writing ...

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Path to Eternity

AntiNoob

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AntiNoob
AntiNoobAuthorAntiNoob

How can I improve? Can you tell me?

WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv5WN_grdy_mthr_fker

1. read every villain you think is impressive 2. find the phycology behind the actions they do 3. i even read about a Cannibalism incident where a man had intense desire to eat a living human being but he didn't commit murder he posted it on a forum to find a willing subject πŸ˜‚ you know what he did and the dude even suggested to eat his penis first so he cut it off and tried it but didn't like it so he fried it and still didn't like it so he through it in the garbage and then moved on to eat the man slowly for the period of next month and posted another post but the next dude backed out and the Cannibal honored his wishes ... true story btw. 4. even hannibal lecter as villain was described masterfully so there is an example of how to villain 101 5. you have to have charisma to be a leader and to make followers you needs a philosophy if you simply ignore the philosophy of the mc and simply describe the crimes he committed even the beloved jocker will be seen as scum and trash hence your mc is unlikable that's a fact that's why i said lazy writing

AntiNoob:How can I improve? Can you tell me?
AntiNoob
AntiNoobAuthorAntiNoob

I see. Thanks. In the future, around chapter 30, he will change. I am going to give him an actual goal to move toward and he is going to be less savage and maybe likable. Again, thanks.

WN_grdy_mthr_fker:1. read every villain you think is impressive 2. find the phycology behind the actions they do 3. i even read about a Cannibalism incident where a man had intense desire to eat a living human being but he didn't commit murder he posted it on a forum to find a willing subject πŸ˜‚ you know what he did and the dude even suggested to eat his penis first so he cut it off and tried it but didn't like it so he fried it and still didn't like it so he through it in the garbage and then moved on to eat the man slowly for the period of next month and posted another post but the next dude backed out and the Cannibal honored his wishes ... true story btw. 4. even hannibal lecter as villain was described masterfully so there is an example of how to villain 101 5. you have to have charisma to be a leader and to make followers you needs a philosophy if you simply ignore the philosophy of the mc and simply describe the crimes he committed even the beloved jocker will be seen as scum and trash hence your mc is unlikable that's a fact that's why i said lazy writing
crese1967
crese1967Lv3crese1967

Even the Joker has a goal. I don't mind evil mc's, but just reading about a mindless serial rapi*t/killer is boring.

AntiNoob:I see. Thanks. In the future, around chapter 30, he will change. I am going to give him an actual goal to move toward and he is going to be less savage and maybe likable. Again, thanks.
AntiNoob
AntiNoobAuthorAntiNoob

I see. I am giving him a goal around chapter 27ish

crese1967:Even the Joker has a goal. I don't mind evil mc's, but just reading about a mindless serial rapi*t/killer is boring.
Educated
EducatedLv2Educated

Seek help

WN_grdy_mthr_fker:1. read every villain you think is impressive 2. find the phycology behind the actions they do 3. i even read about a Cannibalism incident where a man had intense desire to eat a living human being but he didn't commit murder he posted it on a forum to find a willing subject πŸ˜‚ you know what he did and the dude even suggested to eat his penis first so he cut it off and tried it but didn't like it so he fried it and still didn't like it so he through it in the garbage and then moved on to eat the man slowly for the period of next month and posted another post but the next dude backed out and the Cannibal honored his wishes ... true story btw. 4. even hannibal lecter as villain was described masterfully so there is an example of how to villain 101 5. you have to have charisma to be a leader and to make followers you needs a philosophy if you simply ignore the philosophy of the mc and simply describe the crimes he committed even the beloved jocker will be seen as scum and trash hence your mc is unlikable that's a fact that's why i said lazy writing
WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv5WN_grdy_mthr_fker

Its cute that you sensor your self from the internet so much so you didn't know about this stuff already .... what is written there is my own analysis of how the villain's should be portrayed in an fictional novel with regards to the theme that the writer was going for.... why do i have to seek help for my mental health? (that's what i presume you meant by this) i might have used graphic and disturbing examples but it was to prove a point that i wasn't highly sensitive to this topic/theme he was going for and was giving my sincere advice. aren't you being too judgmental? here you give yourself the nick name Educated but totally ignoring what the discussion was going on, making it an wonderful example of irony...

Educated:Seek help
Run_from_big_mum
Run_from_big_mumLv3Run_from_big_mum

accidently typed and auto corrected in 'my' before society, ignore that if you are reading this.

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Gastino
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Whyd you go off on him for saying two words

WN_grdy_mthr_fker:Its cute that you sensor your self from the internet so much so you didn't know about this stuff already .... what is written there is my own analysis of how the villain's should be portrayed in an fictional novel with regards to the theme that the writer was going for.... why do i have to seek help for my mental health? (that's what i presume you meant by this) i might have used graphic and disturbing examples but it was to prove a point that i wasn't highly sensitive to this topic/theme he was going for and was giving my sincere advice. aren't you being too judgmental? here you give yourself the nick name Educated but totally ignoring what the discussion was going on, making it an wonderful example of irony...
WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv5WN_grdy_mthr_fker

i thought about it a lot but, i don't know why i did that....πŸ€”

Gastino:Whyd you go off on him for saying two words