Review Detail of Lethal_Drinker in Path to Eternity
Review detail
Writing is good, it's atleast readable. Story development is just null, he's a psycho not the fascinating or enigmatic or world view challenging ones just a sick, disgusting worm so I couldn't be bothered to follow said development. Character design well like I said before he's a sick, disgusting worm best comparison would be Shaou Tucker from FMA × 100 cause he doesn't even have a flimsy excuse to try and justify his actions. The character seriously feels like a way for the author to enjoy and indulge in such acts of rape, cannibalism, etc. It's not that I hate evil protagonists or something like that but this is just plain repulsive and filthy. Updating stability is fine World building is almost non existent
Path to Eternity
AntiNoob
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Friend, give enough reasons and the synopsis itself gives an idea of how the work is going to go: "A crazy man with a broken mind was executed and reincarnated in an alternate MCU. Let see where this goes." literally the only thing he is going to do is put a character who needs no excuses to tear the world of DC apart. And it is not only the Gore, but the Reasoning behind it, for example we can take Elfen Lied, it has a huge amount of gore and everything but the character does this type of action for some reasons that the reader can understand, but according to what I read it seems that he is only a Psychopath for no reason why he is, without evolution, without charisma and without a soul, just a puppet of the author's whims.
Darkin_king_21:Your review was repetitive didn’t have any valid excuses besides Tucker from fma and what world building the story just started. Also you should read the tags, if it says gore than you should be ready for some messed up stuf.
Hugo_Adam:if someone didn't get the reference by the name, Tucker was the guy that made this...image
you have brought up a childhood trauma of a lot of people who desperately wanted to forget it especially of those who watched the 2003 version
Hugo_Adam:cuz not everyone watched fma
Lethal_Drinker:you have brought up a childhood trauma of a lot of people who desperately wanted to forget it especially of those who watched the 2003 version
Hugo_Adam:if someone didn't get the reference by the name, Tucker was the guy that made this...image
Broxhitman1998:Ah, thank you for this picture. Now I remember my childhood nightmare when I watched the episode.
the character is essentially useless to the story and he does are things which he himself can't justify. I think this is enough.
Darkin_king_21:Your review was repetitive didn’t have any valid excuses besides Tucker from fma and what world building the story just started. Also you should read the tags, if it says gore than you should be ready for some messed up stuf.
But isn’t that what fanfics about, having what you want to happen and dont, your statement can also be applied to all fanfics.
Lethal_Drinker:the character is essentially useless to the story and he does are things which he himself can't justify. I think this is enough.
And you say he does stuff that he himself cant justify, its stated almost every chapter that he does what ever he wants.
Lethal_Drinker:the character is essentially useless to the story and he does are things which he himself can't justify. I think this is enough.
Yes that is why it deserves the mediocre or perhaps even slightly below average rating of 2.5 it does nothing note worth to be above 3 at best. It's my review, which is clear cut, logical and gives the reader an apt description of what to expect.
Darkin_king_21:But isn’t that what fanfics about, having what you want to happen and dont, your statement can also be applied to all fanfics.
I understand that, and i hold no hatred towards you. but why hate on someone’s book when it says it in the tags.GORE.
Lethal_Drinker:Yes that is why it deserves the mediocre or perhaps even slightly below average rating of 2.5 it does nothing note worth to be above 3 at best. It's my review, which is clear cut, logical and gives the reader an apt description of what to expect.
what are you trying to achieve? make me change my rating. You have no logical way questioning my review and all the defences you make only cement my review
Darkin_king_21:And you say he does stuff that he himself cant justify, its stated almost every chapter that he does what ever he wants.
Lethal_Drinker:what are you trying to achieve? make me change my rating. You have no logical way questioning my review and all the defences you make only cement my review
Again wrong, if you want a work to be good put everything you want but be coherent and argued, if you only do what you want without sense that they wire you a 2 stars will not be the worst thing you are going to receive ...
Darkin_king_21:But isn’t that what fanfics about, having what you want to happen and dont, your statement can also be applied to all fanfics.