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_Wessix4Ever
_Wessix4EverLv133yr_Wessix4Ever

the idea behind this story is so cool to me and I like fanfiction with aspects of HxH because they are hard to find in my opinion but this author needs to take more time making sure his spelling is better ik English isnt his first language but he messes up names which are the same regardless of language and even 2 letter words at times witch just makes this feel very rushed and like the author cant be bothered to proof read his chaps

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Naruto world :

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Shame_less100
Shame_less100AuthorShame_less100

you are right, so why don't you do the job you can rewrite this story. just changed the grammar if you please you can change some story line. how about that, bro I am too lazy to do all that so can you do that

_Wessix4Ever
_Wessix4EverLv13_Wessix4Ever

hey man you decided to write not me I'm just giving my fair criticism

Axes
AxesLv5Axes

You misspelled ‘which’😂

babruohohoho
babruohohohoLv3babruohohoho

I am not saying anyone to hate it,just asking asking opinion 😕😕