Review Detail of TheOnlyKing in I'm Luffy (Hiatus)

Really bad to be honest, I could only get to chapter 9 before having to call it quits. I can stomach a harem every now and then but the author makes the mc act so cringe it honestly hurts. Like I literally have to turn my head away from the screen sometimes because it's an embarrassment what the mc is saying. You want some advice in how to not be cringe author? Start saying stuff aloud and ask yourself if you'd be able to say it in a public setting and not be laughed at. Of course there's always the possibility that the author is completely socially inept and doesn't realize how awkward he is.