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aman10
aman10Lv42yr
2022-05-12 16:19

1. it's my bias opinion - i don't like transmigrate novel when there is already bad opinion about mc or whatever character, ex riser everyone know how is he and his behaviour and suddenly you transmigrate in the middle so that's a big nooo for me 2- mc don't do anything to improve his image , he say sorry or all that but there is no motivation behind 3- if author wants he can reincarnated mc as riser in his baby age like 4 years old so he can have time to improve his skills behaviour etc 4 - whole story of premise is just based on riser marriage and there is nothing more than that 5- i don't like to much mc either i know he is teenager and all that but there is limit so yeah that all hope you get enough understanding of this novel

DXD:SI AS RISER WITH JACKASS TEMPLATE SYSTEM

Boboiboyfan01
3.0
21 Chs

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Kuromori111
Kuromori111Lv14

Don't you read the title?

2yr
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Shanto5
Shanto5Lv1

This story is unreadable. The MC simp over every single female character in the story. Give over the top speech and added a weird system. Riser has already powerful. You did not need to add a system to the story.

2yr

Adrion_Lord
Adrion_LordLv13

Is this going to be another rias bashing dxd fic? Cause im pretty tired of those already ................................................

2yr
Fanfic_Lovers
Fanfic_LoversLv3

Harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem

2yr
shirou_sureiya
shirou_sureiyaLv4

its a lie he doesn't have a system the author just tricked you guys the template system he doesnt have it its all a lie the author is big fat liar

2yr
Darius_Chromwell
Darius_ChromwellLv4

I’ll rewrite this review when the mc actually gets his system until then i say good day sir!🧐

2yr
Herohero
HeroheroLv4

so far (I'm in chapter 5) I think the author is doing a good job, precisely with the personality of the Mc who does not force himself to please everyone like this Beta Mc and he is also a little arrogant and narcissistic, and I will add that I currently enjoy as he is interacting with his family . and I add with regard to the grammar and the construction of world , this also it's good job continue like that👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

2yr
skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv14

author doesn't know a thing about Riser, he's a powerful devil that was respected because of his strength he had a Harem, and doesn't need to force servants, he looked pathetic when he lost to Issei but he was one of the lucky young masters in the series

2yr
Sirrow
SirrowLv14

A very disapointing fanfic where the author doesen‘t know a shi* about riser phoenix and the template systeam is a trasch tier i mean comon quick silver as a template where close combat beings are not only very rare but faster then quick silver (movie) and the most fights hapens in the sky…….

2yr
Logain_Septimus
Logain_SeptimusLv1

Practice English or get this translated. ,................................................................................................

10mth
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