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2022-04-29 07:49

Tbh I love how unique the story is, about the cosmoses, characters and so on. But the pacing is to fast. The introduction chapters were quite good but not the chapters after that,

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The_Novel_Man
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Thankyou very much for your review. I will keep that in mind and will work on that as well, I've paused the novel for moment and will continue with medium pace. thankyou brother.

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Posted by the editor, ErwinCloude. Hello everyone. I'd like to clarify some things as I've read a comment on chapter 1 in regards to a lack of logic and how some things don't make sense. Firstly, this novel is created mainly from the author's, Novel Man, imagination and some input from myself here and there, meaning he will write things that he obviously likes and think people will enjoy in this novel. So don't expect everything to be completely logical or for everything to reflect reality. It's a fantasy novel after all, what's the point of reading fantasy if everything is exactly the same as in real life? Thus, we will make some things fantastical or different from what you'd normally expect. Secondly, I feel like a distinction needs to be made between two types of logic, Universal Logic and Book Lore Logic. Mind you, these are terms I just thought up, so don't take them too seriously lol. Universal Logic is, as the name implies, universal. Meaning it's unchanging and is naturally apparent to anyone reading a book. For example, as a certain someone once said, people die when they are killed :D or being caught lying is bad. These are natural things we've all seen or experienced ourselves enough, to know them to be true. So, they remain true in a fictional world as well..... in most cases lol. Whereas Book Logic, is completely based upon the author's imagination, meaning it all relies upon the rules and laws decided by the creator of a fictional world. For instance, tamers holding a small world inside their dwelling which gives them cosmic powers. So, when something strange happens, don't immediately assume it's bad, a plot hole or a slip up by the author. It can often times be based on the book's internal logic. The rules that enforce it are often made obvious in the beginning parts of a book, so a reader should judge the happenings of the story by those rules, assuming there's been enough time to set them all up. Sometimes, some of these rules are made purposefully vague with some hints here and there, for the purpose of cultivating a sense of mystery and intrigue for the reader. In which case, we hope the readers will be patient :D. Although, obviously this book has only begun, so we hope the readers can be patient for now until most of the core rules are revealed as even we're only at the beginning of the story. Additionally, as we're new to this, we'll naturally make some mistakes here and there in the beginning, so we ask for readers to be understanding. With all of that said, we hope you'll enjoy the journey of Akash and his friends. Please be kind in the comments and if you have any constructive criticism, express it in a clam and clear manner, so we can address it and learn from it. Thank you all for reading this :D. If you like this novel, don't forget to comment your thoughts, vote with those precious power stones and leave a review :). If need be, you can also contact us on discord, link provided in the synopsis.

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