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Righteous_Serpent
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Well, it's pretty good, but there are some mistakes. -Timeline is a mess, -Sharingan doesn't come from Otsutsuki, but from shinju, as is the sage body and wood-style, from Kaguya side u get dead bone pulse and byakugan. Hagaromo inherited it the same way Naruto his whiskers, -In Naruto world chakra is more soul thing than body, ofc body is influencing it, but u can say that Yamato isn't Hashirama, even if he has DNA of Hashirama, which for me seems like his chakra isn't that attuned to wood as was Hashiramas(someone is gonna say something about Madara, but he is a transmigration of Indra direct son on Hagoromo). Orochimaru even after switching bodies still has his immense chakra and the same affinity(wind), and lastly, Edo Tensei, which literally forces soul in somebody body, changes them to look the same as they were before they died and having the same bloodline, if the body was the source of these things, the undead ninjas wouldn't have the same bloodline. Besides these points, this novel is pretty good, most people would not care about these things, but I really don't like when someone is putting the same knowledge as in our world in a world where it's clearly different, I don't see any chakra in our world, so the worlds clearly differ in a way. If it was that 'easy' to get fully activated bloodline as activating genes, then Orochimaru would be god be the time of chunin exams. If i made some mistakes fell free to point it to me :)

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D1vineMonarch
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the edo tensei does not force someone's soul into a body, that living human being is a sacrifice for technique, they (the souls) are not in the corpse of the sacrificed person, the body was basically consumed as a sacrifice in exchange of that dust that forms the vase.

D1vineMonarch
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orochimado's body change technique works more like a house if he had sasuke's body he would have all the benefits of the body, including the sharingan and when the house was getting ruined he could exchange for a new one (and in this new house he would lose all the benefits of the previous one, the bloodline and all the benefits of it).

Righteous_Serpent
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???it forces, it literally takes someone soul from pure land and places it into somebody else's body, they can't choose if they want it or not. well ofc the souls are not in the corpse of the person, the sacrificed one was transferred to the pure lands after the ritual was made( u can see that after releasing edo tensei only one was being sent) that edo tensei was used and I never said that. and about the ashes part I totally forgot, I didn't read naruto in 3 years

D1vineMonarch:the edo tensei does not force someone's soul into a body, that living human being is a sacrifice for technique, they (the souls) are not in the corpse of the sacrificed person, the body was basically consumed as a sacrifice in exchange of that dust that forms the vase.
Righteous_Serpent
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he wouldn't ... it was never stated that he would, he just assumed that. Ofc he would get the strength, speed of the body. Sharingan he would probably have it the way Kakashi had, people seem to miss the fact that differentiate Kakashi and Uchiha members is only the fact that they can produce another type of chakra that affect their eyes, if it can activate Sharingan for the first time that's what probably is a switch on/off, Orochimaru wouldn't be able to create it.

D1vineMonarch:orochimado's body change technique works more like a house if he had sasuke's body he would have all the benefits of the body, including the sharingan and when the house was getting ruined he could exchange for a new one (and in this new house he would lose all the benefits of the previous one, the bloodline and all the benefits of it).
SOMMO_ARCANO
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Try reborn in natuto world with tenseigan

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