Review Detail of Kiiara in Red's First Love

I'm in awe! Especially with the writings. That's always the first thing that I notice whenever I read a story and urs r great. I love the simple narration but descriptive enough to conjure an image in my head. The other thing I love about your story is the world building, ofc. I can see the effort that you put in, cos even the name of the places don't sound like sth tht you randomly chose. But, the best part is I appreciate the additional details like the alchemy and magic. The brief analogy you provided in chapter 3 give a good enough explanation to at least guess how they work in ur story. Keep up the good work! <3