Aside from a few clunky sentences herre and there, there's really not much to say about quality. uwu The first chapter is a delight to read, introducing the stakes and the worldbuilding in a very interesting way. And I love how the author was brave enough to write MC's daily life for two chaps before diving into the action. I feel that I see a lot of people just jumping into the action after a few introductory sentences. The introduction of a bunch of characters on ch 2 was a bit eh, but since each character took so little time to expose, it doesn't really bother too much. Aside from all that, excited to see where things go.
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