Coming to the plot of the story, I really liked it. The male lead's character of not giving up is kinda nice. A trait which I like. Coming to the writing it has a few grammatical mistakes along with the change in tenses, it's quite mixed up. But nothing that can't be corrected. All the best for your book[img=recommend]
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