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This story had a really strong start. Very extensive knowledge of family and what is considered to shape a family. It was almost like poetry. It was like reading about the world through another's eyes. It had some minor hiccups like moving from third-person POV immediately to first-person POV without stating it first and a couple of grammatical errors but it was a really good story nonetheless. I commend the author for opening the gateway to her thoughts and allowing us to roam freely on what makes or breaks a person.

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thank u so much❤️❤️❤️ stay tuned for my story further😊