Review Detail of RandomIsGood in Minecraft Survival: ASOIAF

good but bad at the same time. The ideas and world is good but the grammar of this is hot garbage and so is the perspective this is written. It's like something I would find on wattpad with it being a written in 2nd person, and makes it feel weird as I'm sure everyone is more used to 1st or 3rd person writing. To summarize, fix the grammar and change to either 1st or 3rd person and you got a really good story