Review Detail of Donjai in The Hidden Alpha
Review detail
My rating is kinda low rn because you’ve only released 3 chapters, so story development and world building ratings are low. The story flows well and grammar is excellent, maybe a better introduction to the characters or a prologue will help. Will rerate once you’ve posted more chapters.
The Hidden Alpha
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Thank you for the review! It is important to me to get this type of feedback, because in my opinion people always have room for improvement! I honestly might not have thought overly much about being able to distinguish between dialogue until way later! So that is something I will be thinking over tonight and implementing in tomorrow's chapter, and then go back and edit. I have something in the works now to give more backstory to this world and characters! So stay tuned! Thank you so much again!