Review Detail of Deb_Nath_6301 in Epic Of The Demonic Sage

The story development is nice and all.. the mc is believes in using his head more often than fists. So far the world building is going fine too. The only problem I have is with the way you describe every little action. Some places where questions need not be asked, they are still added making it unnecessary. Like if Lucian reached a door, he will ask Kiana- I guess this is the place. The mc doesn't need confirmation from his Kiana for every little things. Somethings can be written in a simple way- Kiana bring me some food. We don't always need the conversation of - I am feeling a bit hungry, should we have our food now? Lets head out then.. I feel like that 80% of the texts in the story are conversations like that. It has been like 250 something chapters but I feel like I read about 50 chapters. Whatever was written can be compressed in such low amount of chapters. I don't hate more descriptive stories but there is a balance between too much and too little. Well I understand the need to keep up the word count and the need for new ideas. But having a scene stretched on for like 10 chapters isn't fun. The brewery plan itself took like I don't know how many chapters. Three chapters were of him going there to check on the brewery and another chapter was about the the brewery is working. Details are good but unnecessary details makes me want to skip paras after paras. So I hope the author can change this. Sometimes I can literally feel my heart burn with how slow things are.