Review Detail of Syal in District 42
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Hello everyone! The shameless author here, supporting his own novel, hehe. It took a while for me to review my own book, but here it is: When I and my friend were idealizing this story, we were trying to make something different from other novels. Because of it, you will not find magic, system, or cultivation here, but a lot of futuristic technologies that explode things!! ... not all of them, but some do, actually! District 42 is a Steampunk/Cyberpunk story, mixed with transmigration and references to Nordic culture. The MC is a military guy. He has a funny personality, but gets serious when needed, and can even become cold and frivolous to solve a problem. The start of the story has a fast pace, and it stays like this until the 20th chapter or so. That's it. I hope you all enjoy this novel!
District 42
Syal
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I saw all your comments. Thank you for pointing the grammar mistakes I made in the early chapters. I am sorry that it wasn't a good experience for you. However, I assure you that every mistake you found and commented about will be fixed.
Polar_blue:fix your grammar. i gave up reading after many mistakes. although i know you wont fix it. most authors never bother with fixing the writing in order to have quality work.image
interesting. most authors would just ignore my advice. I like your attitude towards your story. do be careful to revisit your earlier chapters to edit them so the quality matches with newer chapters. its a good idea but few ever think of it.
Syal:I saw all your comments. Thank you for pointing the grammar mistakes I made in the early chapters. I am sorry that it wasn't a good experience for you. However, I assure you that every mistake you found and commented about will be fixed.