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Purple_Midnight
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2022-01-30 05:14

Second review of Black Knight Awakened. The story has evolved a lot from where I first started it from. So, my judgement on the story will have to change by more than a bit. First of all, I have to say I was a bit unsure when it first started since I'd written three versions and all of them had different goals. So I wasn't sure which one to stick with. Eventually, it occurred to me that he needed a new goal. I'll keep it short so. Remember, every pro is a con. So take it as you see it or like. 1. An egotist main character. 2. Overpowered characters (not just MC) 3. No Harem (pro or con) 4. God-complex MC (depending on your likes might be a pro or con) 5. Ruthless MC If you want explanations on the things above, read the story and join my discord server. Link in the description. I'm also not going to delete the first review because of some reasons. Aside from that, enjoy the story.

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HazeUniverse_1
HazeUniverse_1Lv2

is there romance ?? btw it is a nice story keep it up bro

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

so another fake op mc. you can't have others be more powerful than an op mc otherwise your mc is no longer op. no wonder books are very boring lately. Well gives me time to grind my games

Purple_Midnight
Purple_MidnightAuthor

OP does not mean there's no one stronger than him. It means overpowered. I don;t know if you read the book at all, but if you did I can't say you're very good at interpreting simple english.

DeathLingers:so another fake op mc. you can't have others be more powerful than an op mc otherwise your mc is no longer op. no wonder books are very boring lately. Well gives me time to grind my games
Purple_Midnight
Purple_MidnightAuthor

Who knows?

HazeUniverse_1:is there romance ?? btw it is a nice story keep it up bro
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

yes overpowered so why would he loose to another. if hes going to loose hes no longer overpowered and should fall i to the strong category

Purple_Midnight:OP does not mean there's no one stronger than him. It means overpowered. I don;t know if you read the book at all, but if you did I can't say you're very good at interpreting simple english.
Purple_Midnight
Purple_MidnightAuthor

I don't think you understand the point of an overpowered MC. Most action novel MCs are actually overpowered at certain points in time, it doesn't mean they don't lose a fight. I'll use the common Chinese novels as an example. The most common trope we see in these novels is the MC becoming "overpowered" in his own dimension. Then a bigger power appears, making him look inferior in comparison. And besides, my MC hasn't actually lost a fight as far as I can remember. So if you still don't see reason, you'd best just stick to other books.

DeathLingers:yes overpowered so why would he loose to another. if hes going to loose hes no longer overpowered and should fall i to the strong category
Kaisen1
Kaisen1Lv4

heh, dumb, what do you like, all of the people are in the same league. it's like superman vs anti-monitor, yes superman is op and can become even more op but anti-monitor is too and he is early and had so much time compared to superman.

DeathLingers:yes overpowered so why would he loose to another. if hes going to loose hes no longer overpowered and should fall i to the strong category
holson_Charles
holson_CharlesLv15

Overpowered means your mc can overwhelm anyone with superior strength. If your mc is op it means he literally should have no equal, he should be the strongest in this novel word.. saitama is op cause in his verse he the strongest he can beat anyone with one punch no matter if u god.. goku is a really overly strong mc but not op cause in verse he got people stronger than him .. so u should just say ur mc is strong it doesn’t affect ur story in anyway.. me when I look for op tag I expect mc to be the strongest.

Purple_Midnight
Purple_MidnightAuthor

I'll take your reply in mind, but the tag stays. For certain reasons of course.

holson_Charles:Overpowered means your mc can overwhelm anyone with superior strength. If your mc is op it means he literally should have no equal, he should be the strongest in this novel word.. saitama is op cause in his verse he the strongest he can beat anyone with one punch no matter if u god.. goku is a really overly strong mc but not op cause in verse he got people stronger than him .. so u should just say ur mc is strong it doesn’t affect ur story in anyway.. me when I look for op tag I expect mc to be the strongest.
Alba_Yin
Alba_YinLv2

Y‘all down there… I don’t think OP=invincible

Dretno
DretnoLv3

I am no romance no harem army

Purple_Midnight
Purple_MidnightAuthor

Try this on for size. No visible romance till the 100s

Dretno:I am no romance no harem army
Dretno
DretnoLv3

gud

Purple_Midnight:Try this on for size. No visible romance till the 100s
Kaisen1
Kaisen1Lv4

don't mind them, they're too dumb for their own good

Purple_Midnight:I'll take your reply in mind, but the tag stays. For certain reasons of course.
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