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DakotaInExile
DakotaInExileLv23yr
2021-07-06 17:56

Other than quite a few spelling mistakes throughout the story chapters, the plot and characters are good. Definitely one of the better stories I have read, I certainly got engrossed in it fairly quickly. It doesn’t feel too slow at the begining and the Mc acts how you would expect, especially from being in a new environment with things he’s never seen before. And the Author does a great job of making you hate a character with a passion one moment, and the next have you actually start liking them. Definitely reccomend giving this a read, though I do feel it depends on the person whether you fully enjoy or mildly enjoy this story. Regardless, it’s written well, needing only some minor editing. Give a few chapters a read yourself and decide from there, at least 10 chapters would be my recommendation. Simply because opinions differ throught the first few chapters in every story and 10 feels the most optimal for deciding whether something is a go-to or no go. Happy reading!

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Cruchymonster
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thanks for the review

leorichard2021_0515
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

wodue
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is there romance?

Cruchymonster:thanks for the review
Cruchymonster
CruchymonsterAuthor

not much. Only a bit here and there. the FL came into the picture at the present, after 130 chapters.

wodue:is there romance?
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