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when I saw the title I thought this will one of the best but when I begin to read it the first chapter was good but why run before walking I mean directly to multiverse travel and choosing unneccerily over powered character as the first member you kill all the fun. It is good idea so think more and do it better and thank you πŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒπŸŒ΅πŸŒ΅πŸŒ΅πŸŒ΅πŸŒ΅πŸŒ΅πŸŒ΅πŸŒ΅πŸŒ΅πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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Creating my family in Danmachi!

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