Review Detail of Shahd_Ammer in The Power of the Five Elements

Hello there, it the author this story is the first story I write. I have always loved telling and creating new storys ever since I was a kid, well I am still a kid, but this may be the first time I put my story in a proper book so you may not find the writing ' very best ' but please remember it's my first time. Also I won't be uploading chapters in a regular time because, as I said, I am still young and I have so much to do like school but I will try my hardest. please dive some good coments 🥰 I will be waiting for good news. 💖