Review Detail of Hacker44 in Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!

the story has great potential, there are typing issues where words are smashed together and a lack of spaces, it would do well to be revised and edited for greater readability. there also seems to be a problem with the story repeating information and looping back only to say the same thing with slight variations in text. the writing quality itself is of a medium level, it's not extremely difficult to understand the story but at the same time the story is rather shallow. there isn't any real depth of background knowledge or story building, it all revolves around the MC's disciples and himself while simply ignore most of the other aspects that make a story truly great. I believe with some fine tuning and proper editing this story will be a wonderful read.