Review Detail of Azner_Alvarez in The Sound of Despair

my honest opinion 5/5 writing one of the best i have read on this platform 3/5 plot development kinda fell off in the middle, although later on made up for it. however, there are a lot of filler that might turn some off. also is a bit weird in some areas. even if you have 7m/s reaction speed to be able to sense objects with all nine senses and react to it most be a sensory overload. 4/5 character dev is okay however it would be better if he was a little more mature in the way he reacts things