Item: The Sound of Despair
Rating: 5

OrdenadorLv43yr

2021-06-22 21:37

Hey there author, I read all the chapters in a day and I really need more of it. I recently started kickboxing and all the information about the martial arts is really interesting and some of it even helped me a bit. I want to say that the combination of fantasy and true, real martial arts is something new in this website and I like it a lot. So I really hope you can continue this amazing novel.

The Sound of Despair

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4.8

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Liked by 1 people

Replies2

StormfuryAuthor

Thank you very much! I plan to keep going for a long time :)! If you just started kickboxing, then I have one advice. Learn to not fear being hit. In the beginning it is normal to turtle up, I did that for a whole year 🤦‍♂️ The moment you don‘t reflexively hide behind your guard with every incoming attack, is the moment you get hurt 30% more but learn 200% more as well during sparring. That doesn‘t mean you should get hit on purpose, try to dodge, block, and step out of range anyways. And always, always wear your mouthguard!

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OrdenadorLv4

Thank you very much for your answer, this is the first time I do something related to fighting and what you said is true, I am afraid of being hit but I will try my hardest overcoming it as kickboxing is really interesting to me and I would like to be better at it. Again, thank you very much and good job with the novel[img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr

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