Review Detail of Ggg_H in Myriad Realms Store Manager System (Harry Potter AU)

The overall plot so far is good and it's pace of development is decent. The plot is not completely original, but what webnovel is? The writing quality is quite good but does not completely fit with the background of the webnovel and there are some slight mistakes with grammar. As a native British speaker I can easily follow along with it and the writer's descriptions and dialogue are quite clear. Other than a few words which are not very widely used in the UK and so would not fit the stories setting, the webnovel is an excellent read so far and I recommend having a go at it.