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2021-08-17 17:12

Hello everyone! Author here, it's been months ever since I've started writing this book, and I must say I'm so proud what I have to offer for the spirity and how I've come so far. I'd like to start with multiple third-POV limited in every several chapters therein (about 45-50). So it might not be the usual third POV omniscient or first POV, but I do feel like you should give it a read. The stability of the updates would always be 2 ch/ day; or so at least I've tried to keep up for my readers. I hope you do enjoy it. The story development: I'd say the start would be a gradual build-up before the main event happens. I thought that it wouldn't be right in my heart that there might be some relations with the settings and whatnot, and it would've been a bummer not to read the two different sides of the same coin. The character design differs on every character POV, but its still up to you how you give it a view base on their observations! The world background has similar issue needed to be address with the story development. But then, like the character design... The world building is sufficient enough for readers to grasp the character interactions of the setting in the world got created. Have fun reading everyone! I can't wait to get to know you all! [img=recommend]

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Is this complete yet ? As the marked said it was completed

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Hai hai! Here we have my review for Chapters 1 to 5 because that is my standard for first impressions on a novel. Fair warning to everyone, the progress is slow in these chapters so it might not be your cup of tea. I will do another review for Chapter 6 to 10 in order to compare and give a more accurate opinion about the pacing. One thing I commend about the writer is the world-building and character introductions in these chapters. Nathalie is a lavish woman. She also knows what she wants and she won't compromise if it's really what she believes in--which is definitely something to admire. There's a trail of breadcrumbs for the readers to be immersed with curiosity about what is coming next. Nothing is a coincidence from what I have seen--despite how it's being played out as a normal day (with a little drama) in the life of Nathalie. As a writer, I am curious about what direction she's taking her novel into and how it will play out. Of course, I look forward to the part where she transmigrates into it. Hehe. I appreciate this background on her before the anticipated event so I can get to know her and see how much development there is in store. So kudos to author-sama for that! One criticism I have is the dialogues. It's not a major concern since the story will have fantasy elements but I currently don't find them natural with the modern urban setting in these chapters. Like I said, they are more appropriate for fantasy settings which is where the story is leading to. But I do think having a simple and straightforward type of dialogue in the modern setting is another way to distinguish the two types of worlds in the story.

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