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Mel_Aniv
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2021-05-05 23:44

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is finished work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! ADVICE Edits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️

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Michelle_Sosa
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Thank you so much for that. I will work on the edit, this is my first story. I really appreciate the review.

Mel_Aniv
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You are welcome! I am very happy to hear it from you. Please do check mine too! 🙏

Michelle_Sosa:Thank you so much for that. I will work on the edit, this is my first story. I really appreciate the review.
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