Review Detail of Nosferatu in The Mage's Galaxy
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You really need to work your focus. Dont jump around so suddenly and explain about other thing in the midst of something. Man, i skipped most of the chapter when you suddenly explaining about those unrelated people like when you explain about the background of a shopkeeper. I mean who care about what happened with the shopkeeper or story of some spirits who take about 2 or more chapter and then disappear into the coffin. Cmon work your focus and do the plot properly, 60 chapter wasted without proper introduction and you want to go premium? Really? What are you supposed to feed your reader? Info dump?
The Mage's Galaxy
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Hello there, I apologize for that. I admit that that was a dumb move of mine and did not think of it properly, but I still hope that you'd be able to bear with it just until the end of the 1st arc which is not far, chapter 70 would be the end of the backstort while the temple arc would end at approximately chapter 80.