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Review Detail of Auri_Kvothe in Primordial Dimensions

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Overall the novel is decent. But thee are just somethings that I can't move past. One of these is the numbers. Another is how the MC personality and how he acts is conflicting with what the author wrote and described.The numbers is the biggest one for me. At one point the MC is jumping, and exerting force to evade an enemy. this would be understandable, if the enemy wasn't even 2ft tall. 45 cm is 1.47 ft. Don't include numbers if they make no sense.

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