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kuhaku_soraLv33yr
2021-04-03 14:20

She was made into a Spear as a weapon for war. This alone made my body shiver in delight. After reading the first few chapters of the story, I find it very unique and somehow interesting unlike any other trasnformation. After all, this is a story that revolves around Geraldine-who turned into a spear (a weapon for war). I really like the concept! Keep up the great work~

Spear of Retribution

Monachre
4.8
164 Chs

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Monachre
MonachreAuthor

Hello, the author here. I would like to point things to look forward on my novel. Good Stuff: > I will do my best as an author to create decent chapters that fit your taste. > You can chat with me anytime in discord if you have a suggestion regarding the novel. (You can put it in the comments too). Bad stuff: > Expect Grammar mistakes but I'm trying to lessen the errors and edit it multiple times. > This novel is a slow-burn book so expect the long number of chapters. > This novel is focused on revenge and the romance is only seen in the later chapters. > MC - she has suffered too much in the hand of her enemies and tend to focus only in revenge without thinking about the feelings of others. There are also strong and weak points in her personality (so please don't hate her). > Cultivation - Although this novel has cultivation, I tend to focus on the characters more. > I write this without an ending, so I am clueless about the flow of the story as you are but we are all together in this journey. > There will be inconsistency/plot holes - if we sink, we'll sink together. > Pacing, there will be fast and slow points. > This is a work of fiction, I sometimes write names (such as food poisons) that may not be true so don't be confused with reality. Warnings: > Before reading this novel, please prepare yourself to blur the reality and enter the world of the Empire. > Grab a cushion to punch if you're angry or pissed on the plot or characters. > A box of tissue if you wanna cry. > Prepare yourself for a roller coaster of emotions. "Open for suggestions and recommendations!" Thank You!

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Nocturnal_Dreamer
Nocturnal_DreamerLv10

Dope idea!!! I am biased when it comes to revenge stories like this. The intriguing start will definitely pull you in. Although it seems the trajectory of the story moving forward is about the common romance trope about an act of revenge that will turn into a love story, other elements from the interesting characters, various points of view, and worldbuilding will keep the astonishing story exquisite. Without being bias, I found some grammatical and syntax errors but it's not too much to disrupt the flow of the story and to drive you to the point that it's irritating. As the title suggests, the MC became the strongest human weapon in the world because of some sorts of reasons. The tragic backstory that would push the plot was something you would love in this novel. The complex romance gave me Joker-Harley vibes but the female MC was the joker. Give it a try! Overall, it's a great read. It's worth a try reading this! Give it a chance! Thanks for the effort making this Author. You did a splendid job. 🤗😊

3yr
HERshy
HERshyLv10

The plot is like the manhwa " I tamed a tyrant and ran away" i swear. just stating my view so need to be mad..........i just find it sus...... .......................

3yr
YouthGod
YouthGodLv4

This looks like another incredible work, I know how much hardwork you put in this *wipe tears* I will be enjoying this novel for the time being... I just noticed that I'm getting hooked with this FL a bit too much tho... anyways, goodluck author! I'll support you!

3yr
docaqui
docaquiLv11

while writing this review.. i've only read the first chapter but the story had already hooked me up and wud want to read more. the author is really good at portraying the characters properly.. great job author

3yr
Wateristubeg
WateristubegLv12

While reading the synopsis, it really intrigued me to read more about the whole book. I can say that the chapters are well written. You can see the efforts that Author has placed to produce good quality content. I will look forward to what would happen to the FL throughout the book. Good luck author-nim!!

3yr
Some_Reading_Cat_
Some_Reading_Cat_Lv3

So far of what I read which is the end of the chapters for now it is really different from the other type of revenage novels it is different and special in every way.I’m getting pretty picky over the time I have been reading on the app so this is a nice fresh start to me and not the “typical” revenage novels.Also okease go and support the author and maybe if you want give them powerstones 🥰

3yr
eths_me
eths_meLv2

I like the synopsis it’s a good structure that describes how good will the flow of this novel and I was a bit curious too about Geraldine. So if I am you add this now on your lib! ✨👌🏻

3yr
Midnight_Raven0425
Midnight_Raven0425Lv10

ooooh i am really not into reading stuffs but this caught my attention starting from the synopsis and the initial chapters so good job author, keep it up

3yr
ItzMeSora
ItzMeSoraLv2

Thnx for the Story much appreciated Guys checkout my new novel too <3

1yr
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