Review Detail of Mr_HonestReview in Ascension of the Nephilim

Bro this is good sh*t,the humor and the way you use fate is perfect. Breaking the 4th wall is good and all but too much of it will ruin this, it will push away the other potential readers who cant relate to your joke. The way you use fate to challenge the wits of mc is perfect instead of using it as a GOD TIER PLOT ARMOR I hope he will have an army of beast and werebeast like werebear and lycanthrope,humans who can transform,im talking about killing bites vibe. and if your going to build an army of dead it could be elite army of skeletons like overlord kind elite,you have a underground temple so it should have a floor masters. I support this kind of filipino authors. Good luck with your novel bruhh.