Review Detail of DiminishingLight in Ascension of the Nephilim

This novel is great. There is a lot of newbie writing quality in the start, but it gets better and better until you suddenly gain the writing skills of Er Gen. (the guy who wrote A Will Eternal and ISSTH.) The writing stability is good, but you took 2 months to write 60 chapters. BRO! I know you can do better than that! The development of the story is actually well planned out, instead of the "so there is a guy named bob and he rules the universe" type of bs. You designed some of the first characters like arrogant young masters, but it got better for the most part. The world background, I don't even have to talk about it. 5 out of 5 stars, definitely one of the best community-made novels I have ever read.