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R_F_T_SLv33yr
2021-04-19 22:15

So one thing I feel should be worked on with this novel is description and also dialogue Most times I get confused over who is talking and also the dialogue feels unnatural in some places Pretty cool synopsis which gives off the aura of an entertaining plot tho but the story leaves a lot to be desired Anyways, good luck author and I hope my review helps ☺️

The Vampire Sorority: Dare to Defy

Gnaipafe
4.9
196 Chs

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Gnaipafe
GnaipafeAuthor

Thanks for the review and for pointing out, what should I need to enhance. I will make sure to see through it, it's very helpful.

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