An interesting story. From the very beginning, you try to transfer the reader to the world you have created. I am not really in the fantasy genre, but I couldn't stop reading. Your characters are expressive and you are great at building tension and the plot is addictive; that's what writing books are all about - keep the reader's attention! You're doing great! Good luck with the contest!
DonDenis
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