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Review Detail of SKRZ in Fate; Unlasting

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I like how descriptive the story is. You could literally see what the author was trying to say. In the first chapter for instance, I really liked the tension build up and the events that played afterwards - it was very magical - and I liked how it was written by the author. But like the synopsis said, it is a brutal world. It's sad. I really liked how the author conveyed the character's emotions as well. It has a good story line - pretty unique for me. But again, it's a brutal world to live in - and that's what the story's setting is, and i say the author has written a compelling storyline with this setting. The only other thing that I'd like to mention is the sentence structure. I just noticed a couple that the author can fix, but that did not affect the story negatively at all. Other than that, overall, the story is engaging and is a good read! Great job!

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