Review Detail of ARGAS in 11 Years

The usual three star review from the author here, this is my WSA 2021 entry for the First Love category! I am both excited and terrified because I've never written romance before but I want to expand my skills a bit. If you haven't expanded on the synopsis, I will tell you that this is a wierd mix of romance, comedy, and sad stuff. Smut is a no-go unless you guys beg for it, I guess. If you are curious, please take a look and comment on anything you feel doesn't seem write. I welcome all criticisms as long as they aren't baseless.