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Review Detail of MarcheHare in Master of Voracious Beasts

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MarcheHare
MarcheHareLv142yrMarcheHare

I like the premise of the story, however the story has a bunch of info dumps and bunch of unecessary words, I don't know if the writing will be better but it is hard to endure specially in the beginning chapters, where the author fully explain the rules of pokemon and act as if we do not know it

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Master of Voracious Beasts

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I'm not pinning out of hate, I'm just doing this for future readers to know what's the downside of my novel. Don't worry, I'm fixing it and learning how to write properly.