I just read to the currently last accessible chapter with fast passes (chapter 170). It is noticeable that the author is an amateur author. But not in a bad way. Most things are top notch. It's just that things are not always fleshed out like in the stories of the really good authors and some strategies are a bit linear, especially in the beginning. But generally speaking this is a great story, playing in a great setting and the characters are better than anything I could write. Also the author respond to some comments. That's always a plus.
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