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2022-04-05 05:26

Despite the grammatical hiccups, which is fairly regular. I'm liking what I'm reading. The FL is not stupid nor is the ML. However, it appears that there are more than one lead in the story, since its early yet I'll reserve my opinion on that however what I do get is that one reincarnated while another transmigrated. Hopefully the story continues with its interesting flow, consistent updates and happy ending. This story will stay in my library as long as it continues to do so.

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Editing my review a bit - author you need an editor or grammarly. There is a lot of grammatical errors. English may not be your first language, however in this case while I applaud your effort in telling your story, the grammar police would have a field day with this.

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Thanks for pointing that out. I will edit my work.

phoenix_8888:Editing my review a bit - author you need an editor or grammarly. There is a lot of grammatical errors. English may not be your first language, however in this case while I applaud your effort in telling your story, the grammar police would have a field day with this.
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