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There is probably a good story hidden somewhere in this, but the poor grammar and weird pacing makes it hard to find. I wonder if maybe English isn't the first language of the author or something. Given that others seem to like the story and characters a lot, this could probably benefit from a proofreading and a bit of editing.

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My Boyfriend is a Campus Bad Boy

Maryixxx

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Hello, thank you for your honest review. I am working on it to give the best story to all readers out there. I hope you will still like it despite its flaws and errors. ☺ PS: Yes, I am looking for a proofreader or editor as well (voluntary act). ☺