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Review Detail of MatchaMilk in Villainess for the Devil

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MatchaMilk
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Reading the synopsis already pulled me in and made me want to read more. I'm always in for a good romance and revenge story (with transmigration/reincarnation?) and this is perfect. First of all the writing style is great. It's descriptive and beautiful (tho there were a few mistakes here and there, with some editing its easily taken care of-some typos and tenses mixed up) . Especially the MC's feelings were vibrantly conveyed and as a reader I could feel and experience everything the MC did. (Although my own preference, 1st POV takes a while to get used to). Also, I wanted to learn about the MC's past a bit later than have it all revealed in the first chapter, because it felt a bit of exposition (but who am I to talk?) I love the MC, she feels strong at the beginning but then more realistic. However, I am a bit surprised at her change from the first chapter to the later ones, while I do get that after she entered a new body and became confused, I still felt a bit down seeing the cliche of the female lead being weak in front the male lead. None of her strength is really seen, and I do hope the MC can use her powers again and not play along the whims of the ML (and focus on her revenge). The ML is more or less of the cliche overbearing and possessive type, although like MC mentioned he has many different sides which is interesting. Let's see how they develop as characters and their relationship. The story development is also well-done, not too slow or fast, and the world building also shows promise. Excited to see how powers/magic will play into everything, and how the world works. All in all, a very great and beautiful story, that is a pure gem not left to be unread!

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Villainess for the Devil

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alienfrommars
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Aww. thank you! This is one of the best review I had so far and I love it. Thank you for reading and leaving this insightful review. And yes, after reading this review, I had to re-read all chapters for a thorough editing. This review helped as I had noticed the inconsistency of the character and had to correct it. Also, my bad habit of mixing tenses in between. As for the exposition, I couldn't argue with it since it's meant to be an exposition to get a good grasp of our MC's character. I thought that's how webnovel works. haha. Anyway, thank you! I'll try and keep this advice at all times.