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1AMLv112yr1AM

Into 17 chapters as of now. Loved the genre and tonal shift in the story. But I personally felt, you could have introduced the 'REWIND' plot point soon, felt the pace slower and confusing in the early chapters because of it. Really loved the main character and her dilemma because of her 'choice'. Will be continuing...

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More Than What Meets the Eye

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Thank you! I've never really noticed that, maybe if I finish the story I'd check how to make things clearer for the first few chaps. Tysm!