Review Detail of BlindBandit in More Than What Meets the Eye

I read the synopsis and it interest me, so i dived in... overall, its a good story, I rated all 5 except the writing quality, I do like how descriptive you are, a chapter is too short, it breaks my immersion and you combine sentences a little bit too much, its too long. anyhow, its a good read, I recommend it, Keep up the good work author. Kudos to you!