Review Detail of Adwaid_Nambiar in Duality or destiny?

So the story itself is pretty amazing and I could see through the references and that just made the reading experience even more enjoyable. And I like the MC and the humor used in this. Story is dialogue heavy and honestly I love it, as I myself use a similar method in my stories. There are some issues here and there but personally I wasn't bothered by it, but it still can be improved. And overall I am enjoying reading this, I haven't finished this yet but I am impressed with whatever I have read!