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Great plot idea,Author! 😍 I love body swap stories and novels! Definitely going to see how your novel goes. 😊😊 You have a great synopsis, but it will need a little editing to grab more attention. You need to inform your readers that it's about a body swap even though you have the tag. 🙂🙂 Add more words that shows feelings in your story and you'll be greater!

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Duality or destiny?

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Thanks for your great advice!